miércoles, 14 de octubre de 2015
Are You Distracted by Technology?
In this time being distracted by technology is very easy. Technology offers to you a lot of comodities specialy to help you to obtain entretainment, for example shows, social medias, informative and educative programs also. in my opinion everybody is being attratacted to technology that sometimes we forgot how to be a person and isted of speaking or going out with friends you only have to watch your e-mail in your smartphone to comunicate woth others. In think that it is very easy to get distracted by technology.
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In this time being distracted by technology is very easy. Technology offers to you a lot of comodities (products) specialy to help you to obtain entretainment, for example shows, social medias, informative and educative programs also. in my opinion everybody is being attratacted to technology that sometimes we forgot how to be a person and isted of speaking or going out with friends you only have to watch your e-mail in your smartphone to comunicate woth others. In think that it is very easy to get distracted by technology.
ResponderEliminar-Punctuation: use comas after a prepositional phrase to separate main clause. "In this time, being distracted...", "... programs also. in my opinion..." instead of programs. Also, in my opinion",
-Grammar: "comodities" instead of "amenities or facilities", "to help you to obtain" instead of "to help you obtain", "forgot" instead of "forget", "... friends you only have to watch..." instead of "friend you only watch...", "... communicate with others. "... communicate with them."
-Mispelling: "commodities", "isted" instead of "instead", "woth" instead of "with", "In" instead of "I"
-There are only 4 sentences.
-Ideas need more development.