miércoles, 21 de octubre de 2015

Technology!

     We are in the 21st century and we find out tha technology is developing at an incredible speed that everything we do involves it. From the beginning yhe human race has explored too many things and developed and acquire some skills that allowed to increase in intelligence. At this time there is a lot of things we perform in our lives that has to be with inventions, for example a simple fact of transportation it is not a problem now that we have cars, airplanes, and more to supply that need. Almost the 90% of actions and needs are preceding by the usage of technology. In my opinion it has pros and cons depending on the maturity of the people and obviously in the usage of this tools; it can produce a good or a bad result depending on the desires, for example if i drive a car to get fast to a place i can choose to be careful and move in a considarable speed or i can choose to move on a incredibly fast speed and probably have an accident or run over a person. For me technology has a great influence in us because it is everywhere and it is developing so fast that tofay it is a need for us to be technologized.

1 comentario:

  1. Paragraph topic is too broad.

    Typos: "yhe" instead of "the". "i" instead of "I"

    Misuse of "the". "Almost the 90% of actions...", "... of the people...",

    Misuse of semicolons: "... of this tools; it can..." there should be a period instead of a semicolons.

    The example of the car is note related to technology, or at least it is not explained like that.

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